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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhh its short... XD other then that I loved.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nothing against your story, but a tip from someone who spends a great deal of time riffling through fics, trying to find something good: Fix your description. Spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes, and punctuation mistakes, automatically tell the person who comes upon your story, that you don\'t know how to write for crap. And I would not have known that you could, had I not skimmed through your first chapter to get to the review button.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take on how Hotohori found Houki. Very dark at his first interactions with her, but believable. It ends very good too!
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yumy fanfic!!! *drooling* I loved it!! Keep writing more fanfics on Hotohori-sama and Houki, please!!!!!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Not bad at all.
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I reconise I dont really like Hotohori x Houki, but I must tell that this one fic was very good! Very well written too! =P
Good job! ^_^
Good job! ^_^
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a really well written story. I\'ve only read a few hotohori/houki fanfiction stories but this one has to be the best. Write more Fushigi Yuugi fics!!!!!!!
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