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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
these stories are pretty you should add another one on like a time elapse maybe have them move back to Pallet Town with Ash as a gym leader or a Frontier brain since he did win the battle fontier, there a so many possiblities.
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Atsui! Hot! That was hot! It would have been amusing if Ash and Misty did it on Pidgeot's back! Hahahaha, oh the joy and strangeness of it all!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want to say one more thing: This was better than the first one! Though I'll never understand how Magikarp evolved from a fake KO?
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update this series but why not make it more than just one chapter stories make it more interestingand hope you get time to update the story or make a new one
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May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are truly the best writer I have ever seen you must E me me and tell me where you got the crazy idea of this fic. (I read the other one also and I really thought it was cute)
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February 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There definitely arenany any quality Pokemon NC-17 fics out there and this one is up with the best of them. After reading both parts, I urge you to continue writing as much as possible. I commend you on a job well done. 10/10 for sure. Any additions I will be sure to read.
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February 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked this one more than the first one.Continue this story,I like it.