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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Overall the story was fairly decent. However, you put way too much blank spaces between paragraphs. I\'d go back and edit if I were you.
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great *standing ovation* Two of my fave characters getting together, the only twisted thing was the bloodletting, they must be really messed up to like slashing themselves...or maybe it\'s something I just don\'t understand. Anyway, it was beautiful.
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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude this fic is awsome,you should write more fics or make a sequel to this one.This fic was deep i mean real deep,like \"hippie/beat-nic deep\"......lol but seriously this is awsome.if you a test reader just e-mail i\'ll gladly read.