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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like your fic. there are some really funny parts. i also like how descriptive you are. although chapter 3 is just wrong.....*shudder* thats just...eeeeewwww. oh and chapter 4 wasnt that great either. but thats just my opinion. anyways love the fic update soon.
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it!very um.....desriptive!!PWEAAAASSEEEE add another chapter!!!!!i wanna........no GOTTA read more of this very intresting
fan fic!!thank yous!!!
fan fic!!thank yous!!!
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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jayman,
Dude! What was THAT!?!? Listen, I like smut as much as the next person, but that was just WRONG!!!What the HELL were you THINKING!?!??? Dude, seriously that was sick.And do you have to mention \"virgin blood?\" Well, do ya!?!?Seriously, sick.
Dude! What was THAT!?!? Listen, I like smut as much as the next person, but that was just WRONG!!!What the HELL were you THINKING!?!??? Dude, seriously that was sick.And do you have to mention \"virgin blood?\" Well, do ya!?!?Seriously, sick.
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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jayman,
Dude! What was THAT!?!? Listen, I like smut as much as the next person, but that was just WRONG!!!What the HELL were you THINKING!?!??? Dude, seriously that was sick.And do you have to mention \"virgin blood?\" Well, do ya!?!?Seriously, sick.By the way, I\'m talking about Chapter 3.
Dude! What was THAT!?!? Listen, I like smut as much as the next person, but that was just WRONG!!!What the HELL were you THINKING!?!??? Dude, seriously that was sick.And do you have to mention \"virgin blood?\" Well, do ya!?!?Seriously, sick.By the way, I\'m talking about Chapter 3.
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very good. i was really impressed.
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
pretty damn good, and it had me laughing good job
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting... haha. Maybe next time... you put in Haruka... excuse me... amara and Michelle.
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice chap, update soon
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh... That was a fun read! I thoughut Michelle was a little out of character in that she wasn\'t a little jealous. But that just added to the fun! The only lem lem I had with the fic was that you refered to \"Amy\" as \"Ami.\" Yes, Ami is they name they use in the original, but it sounds completly different form \"Amy\" when they say it. I know I\'m a little picky but to me the dub and the original are to different things.