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for The Needs of the Inhuman

by TimeBat

person Niongi
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's Seras not Saras. :D Other then that love it.
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... love canal?
person Iceheart111
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You do realize Ceres couldn\'t be turned into a vampire unless she was a virgin, at least in the hellsing universe. Other then that cute lemon.
person Morgan
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
to be quite frank, it sucked. the whole thing read like the summary for a hardcore porn video. it wasn\'t sensual, it was just vulgar and annoying. avoid street words like butt, dick, and pussy. this seemed like it was written by a middle-schooler. and an 11-inch penis? come on, get real. that sort of thing only happens in adolescent boys\' dreams. a man with an 11-inch penis is likely to remain a virgin the rest of his life because any woman is going to say he\'s too big for her.

with a lot fo work, you could be a good writer. but you\'re nowhere near it yet.
person .
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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