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for Eyes of Lost Hope

by superjmm

person hiei77
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far. Pe coe continue.
person Broken
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this is great. some grammer and spelling needs fixed. other than that. I can\'t wait for more!
person Anon
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like your story, please update soon
person Reika
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The grammar and pace could use some work; try not to rush it too much. However, your plot is interesting enough to keep a reader into it. I would definitely read another chapter.

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