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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your poems including this one are pretty, but I find them of of hard to understand generally. The imagery is good. You just need to make tefereferences more clear. Anna
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yami Kitsune: COOL! I like your poem (it IS a free verse poem right?) I like how you didn\'t sugar coat him. He is a murderer, angle of death and everything else you called him, the cop working for the government isn\'t the real Hajime Saito, the captain of the Shinsengumi is, the manslayer from the war is, not this government lackey. You put him in perspective.
Rurouni_agra: Yea, the wording it really good, that and you described Saito about as accuratly as possible with out naming him, by name or by the common known wolf part of him. It was a unique way to describe him.I\'d like to see your view on Kenshin.
Yami Kitsune: Or the Battousai.
Ja ne.
Rurouni_agra: Yea, the wording it really good, that and you described Saito about as accuratly as possible with out naming him, by name or by the common known wolf part of him. It was a unique way to describe him.I\'d like to see your view on Kenshin.
Yami Kitsune: Or the Battousai.
Ja ne.