rate_review Reviews

1) I noticed some grammer and spelling problems.
2) Haru is in love with Yuki. it says so in the manga (vol 3) and the show (ep.10... I think).
3)Peolple who flame you for M/M content obviously haven\'t read much on this site.

This is really awesome... but I don\'t really know why you said it was racy. It doesn\'t really have anything really sexual in it. BUt your an awesome writer and I hope you post more stuff

i read your fanfic about Haru and Yuki and i thought that i was wonderful and you shouldnt let people get to you. True not everyone has an open mind but if they dont like it they shouldnt read it and if you thinking write more please do because i love to read and i can\'t wait if you post more. And i also think that Haru loves yuki and when he is black haru it comes out more than if he were white haru

Short, dark, and wonderful. No glaring grammer or spelling errors, excellent characterization... infinatly better than most of what you find on FF.net if I may say so. I love this story.

That is soo sad ;____; poor haru-baby -sniffles-

I think both Black and White Haru are in love with Yuki. I mean, come on. I think he does show it in the anime...It kinda annoys me how ppl think shonen ai/yaoi are gross.

Anyway, very nice fic. I love the Haru/Yuki paiing a lot. It was the first pairing I liked in Furuba fiction...To bad there isn\'t any more of it around ;_; Nice writing...Makes me wanna go write a Haru/Yuki story...Hmmm, I think I will. The name I put is my username at fanfiction.net

That was soo sad ;_;! I usually don\'t think much of guy/guy stuff but the emotions evoked by your fic are so sad. I just want Haru to be happy and it\'s understandable the way Haru feels towards Tohru since she\'s one of the reasons he\'s in pain. Please, don\'t let anyone else\'s bad reviews get you down. They just don\'t get it. Hope yoep wep writing. G2g TTFN ^_^