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What happens to the rest of the chapter!

I like it. True there was not much romance, but the sex was A-OK. And besides, once you write your first lemon, they get easier after that. LOL Don\'t stop... I think you got a lot of potential. Write another one... maybe about Aoshi catching Misao cleaning up and starting a big argument so she can tell him off. That might be fun... she could tell him Sano got what he never noticed was right under his nose, and then somehow get him mad enough to do the rough-love thing. HMMMM... shit, I like that idea myself. LOL. Have fun, and keep writing.
Tsukisan