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Show more of Marina and Flannery! Having other gym leaders like Jasmine would be even better!

I read it about six months ago and loved it. i was just rereading, and wanted to ask you if you were planning on updating anymore. I hope you do, this is one of the best lemons on the site!

If you are still writing this story I would like to see something between Ash and Duplica. Now that\'s rarity!

6\" isn\'t big, and you make it likes it 10\". kinda lame. more than kinda. weirdo..

I want more! MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS FUKIN' AWESOME SHIT!!!!!

I think you should add Ash to the equation in the next chapters/sequels. you seem to be a fantastic writer, and my vote is firmly in the \"keep going\" column. Although, you prolly should get a beta; you have a few grammar and spelling slips.

i liked it alot, but there was a \"sizable\" (lol) problem. Pikachu is what maybe 16 inches (without his tail)? No one uses real cock sizes but when you say he\'s holding her head and getting a BJ he\'s also suposedly groping a breast... with what a foot? as to her bieng forced, pikachue is so small i\'m sure she could break free. even a weak 10 year old could grab him and drop-kick him into the wall, his arms and legs are to slim to be strong. he relies upon swiftness and speed. otherwise great fic, if u had used a bigger aggressor it would have been near perfect

u shud do a thing with a guy an a grl pkmn

great story. here are some ideas have team rocket reveal their plan or have james take care of his job.

Have a couple of ash\'s other pokemon come into the story like charizard or bulbasor chickarita or something. Or have givonni come into the plot.havehave a gangbang or three-some or something.