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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. can\'t wait to read more.
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
About time Ash\'s mom got some action. I would love to read an Ash/Delia story. No really, I do!
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good, write more.
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i have no segjestions, cause its already great, just please update soon!
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Curious, the foul lane wae was...interesting though I wouldn\'t expect to hear it from a ten-year old (perhaps a bit of backstory or some such to help explain that away?). And Pikachu\'s physical description seemed a bit off, for instance when the story started Pikachu was small enouo rio ride on Ash\'s shoulder but during the sex-scene is made to sound like he\'s as tall as May.
Besides that and the age thing it seems okay.
Two ideas (requests?) came to mind however at the end of the 6th chapter.
1. Jessie and Meowth. Perhaps James goes out of the room to put Ash in a closet somewhere just for the hell of it, but as it really turns out he slipped some of that alcohol into Jessie\'s drink so after he leaves she starts to think of having sex with Meowth, when the pokemon wakes up he finds Jessie topless licking his member and asking him if he wants to fuck another bitch, Meowth replies by using something to tie her hands/arms to the headboard and screwing her rotten. Perhaps later on (some hours, maybe a day) Jessie and May wake-up only to find that Meowth is there and he\'s invited quite a few other pokemon for a little gang-bang action.
2. A sort of sequal to this where the girls are older (16+) and one way or another end up becoming Pokebitch\'s in the wild.
Besides that and the age thing it seems okay.
Two ideas (requests?) came to mind however at the end of the 6th chapter.
1. Jessie and Meowth. Perhaps James goes out of the room to put Ash in a closet somewhere just for the hell of it, but as it really turns out he slipped some of that alcohol into Jessie\'s drink so after he leaves she starts to think of having sex with Meowth, when the pokemon wakes up he finds Jessie topless licking his member and asking him if he wants to fuck another bitch, Meowth replies by using something to tie her hands/arms to the headboard and screwing her rotten. Perhaps later on (some hours, maybe a day) Jessie and May wake-up only to find that Meowth is there and he\'s invited quite a few other pokemon for a little gang-bang action.
2. A sort of sequal to this where the girls are older (16+) and one way or another end up becoming Pokebitch\'s in the wild.
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
a Misty, May, and Ash thresome would be the best. Please have one and just what is team rocket up to?
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Urrr, okay... Its written alright. I wanna see some more, and include Misty if you can. I think she\'s a babe, heh... X_X
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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOH YEAH!!! ME SO HORNY!!! MNT SNT SEX FOR VERY LONG TIME!!! I WANT YOU O FUCK ME RIGHT NOW!!!
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November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I love it! and I\'d like to see Misty in this story
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update soon. Its a great story