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June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
While some of the characters are a bit out of it and your punctuation is mediocre, this is still a hot story. Good work!
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. i've read it twice! i think its awesome. tho i notice that you have a few spelling errors here and there. note: heal is different than heel (as in heel of shoe, heel of the foot)
rebecca
rebecca
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn you Usopp! Aah well, if it happen so fast, how good would it be then? I'm glad you wrote a LxN fict; the OP section DOES need more of these to balance out those Yaois and even those ZxN and SxN. I'd rather read a ZxT or SxR than the those other two! And I'm staying as far as I can from Yaoi!
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohohoho! Luffy is such a pervert and so is Nami! She's going to meet Sanji with no panties! Oh this is great, great stuff! Aah, if only there were more of LuffyxNami...
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You made the SanjixRobin so damn dirty along with LuffyxNami just as dirty! Because of you, I've taken a liking to the SanjixRobin pair! Wooooo! That was an awesome and hot sex scene! You rock!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of THE best One Piece fics I\'ve read. *bows to you* You are awesome. X)
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this charming story. Luffy/Nami are my favorite pairing and there really aren\'t enough of these stories out there. I do have one small thing to talk to you about. It concerns the spelling of a word... waist. I\'ve seen it several times in the story misspelled as its homonym, \'waste\'. Now, unless you INTENDED for it to read, \'Luffy put his arm around Nami\'s food intake by-product\', you may want to go through and correct that. Aside from that small thing, which I\'ve seen in many other stories, it\'s quite well written. Arigato.
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved your fic, but the reason I\'m writing this is because this fic is gonna be deleted. This fic has no disclaimer, and according the main page, it says all fic with no disclaimer are gonna get earsed. I\'m just writing this because your fic is too good to be deleted for such a small reason. Please, write a short one up quick, don\'t let future readers of this fic miss out on it cause of such a silly reason. Your story is too good to lose because of this little technicality.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first luffyxnami fic I\'ve read (I\'m usually a NxZ or NxS fan), but it was great. I loved it so much. I hope you plan on writing more!