rate_review Reviews

This is such a great little piece of fic. I am glad I only got to read it this late in the game, being that you are still
going to work on it, I don\'t think I would\'ve been patient waiting for you to update.

Oh yeah to the actual review:
Characters are all right on the money, very engaging storyline. The dialog is true to the manga (sorry haven\'t gotten to watch the anime yet)
The erotic sequences are very endearing thanks to the balance between lust and emotional involment.

Ok that being said...
For the love of GAWD someone get this guy a cracked piece of software or something!

I am sure we are all rooting for you and hanging on \'till you can get this thing started again.

Sorry that I havent updated this yet, I had a chapter done and I restarted it... then I finally finished it, and I had tro reformat my computer and lost it. Now I have to trying and find another Microsoft word program again... so thats whats taking so long... sory for the wait... Im just letting you know I havent forgotten about this fic.

UM...When is chapter 3 gonna be out?

I BEEN WAITING FOR MONTHS!!!!!!!!

Eeeeeee! I can\'t wait for you to update this! I\'ve been following it for quite a while, and it\'d be great to have an update soon. ^^

damn that was nice!!!^_^ hope you\'ll update really soon,,,can\'t wait for whats going to happen next!!!%-) can you just skip nami\'s date,,pls pls pls!!!well,hope i\'ll be seeing you soon!!!^_~

Better, MUCH better! Better than the OLD! Keep on the good work!!! XD

You know after I read the first chapter, it was getting good.I think the storys great because you didn't make them get it on right after a few minutes.Instead, a sweet kissing sence.And your fanfic is funny too.Keep up the good work you're doing.

hahahahaha good work very fun

I really like the edits you made to this story. I really enjoyed the original, but there were a few places that did indeed seem out of character, like Nami calling Luffy "Luffy-san" in the original, she would most definitley call him captain in a teasing way. great work, and glad to see you haven't completely abandoned this thing.

AAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! OH MY GOD!!!

I love it! I love it how you didn't make them go all the way the first time...or the second time...XD It's well written too. Just a few spelling and punctuation errors...Although, I really should talk...

*claps*
Veadee gude!