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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was great! just a couple spelling mistakes like Naota, Vespa, and you mispelled haruko at times :3 but otherwise this was awesome :3
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think it was great, some lemons make you read for half an hour, but this one got to the point. just so you know, it\'s \"Vespa Lady\"
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey you should wright more it has more plot then good porn and i like it
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good! Sometimes some of the phrasing was a little awkward, but the words were clear enough that I got the picture. Truly a pleasure to read ^__^
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FAN-FREAKIN\'-FIC-TASTIC! Let\'s see some adventures shall we?
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s good. Short, but good. Sometimes I had no idea what the hell you meant, like \"wad goof or evil\", but I got past the spelling. Maybe you could add more to it.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this fic was awsome,,if you write a sequel to this id love to read it...your other fics are awsome as well...maybe you should publish a book of fics or soemthing...hey its just a thought,,,,keep up the good writing.
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November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You’re spelling and grammar needs work and ya spelled Naota wrong. But it was ok other than those errors.
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November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was good i was wondering when some one would post fooly cooly