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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, wow, this was relly good. That last line had a real punch. I can't think of what to say, really, besides it was amazing.
~ starlight tiger (a.k.a. moon_lit_oasis)
~ starlight tiger (a.k.a. moon_lit_oasis)
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November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was surprised to see this was a free-verse poem, but I have to say I was impressed and liked it very much. I have written free verse for years, and there are not many people who understand the dynamics of how it and the emotions it represents in the Author\'s mind work. Free verse is a lot like an abstract painting. Sometimes you have to take a step back in order to really appreciate its\' true beauty. I very much enjoyed this poem. Bravo! I look forward to reading the rest of your offerings. God bless, and keep writing.
Tsukisan
Tsukisan