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by noneedtoknow

person FoxyOrange
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, PLEASE mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!!!! I love it! ~lol~ Update real soon, ok? Otay! Thnx!

FoxyOrange
person Narakusmiasma
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear God there better be more coming. No pun intended. Hee hee. I really can\'t wait for more. I must congratulate you! I was so intrigued by the idea of the rings and everything that I temporarilly glued my butt to the computer chair to read all of it in one sitting!!! Ah, Please write more! I love every essence of this story! Even the furniture shopping! lmao!

~ Meg the Miasma
person AzureDragoness
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That.... was.... *faints*

Lordy, I can\'t begin to describe how wonderful this story is. I hope you continue promptly!
person FoxyOrange
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...............OMG........OMFG........I LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV IT!!!!! It was its own little story! Sooooo happy! I luv luv luv luv luv luv luv luv it!!!! PLease, keep going! OMG. It was funny, sexy, enchanting, hilarious...need i say more? OMG!!! Akito, that bastard! Haha, he actually did something GOOD. OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!! Kyo and Yuki : sexy as Hell. Tohru: definitely cute and so innocent! Haha, I luv it all! Oh, please, oh PLEASE write more! I was so impressed with that story! Hehehehehe! It made me giddy and it made me laugh and it made me...well, let\'s just say Kyo and Yuki are really hott and sex Gods and Tohru was one lucky ducky! HAHAAHAHAHAHA!!

~*FoxyOrange*~
person Lexy
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really an incredible story. It was hard to wait til chapter 15 for the lemon, but I\'m so glad that you did. You developed their characters so that they were ready for the new development. Please continue with this story, it\'s very well written.
person Naria Lacour De Fanel
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!! THEY DID IT!! THEY DID IT!! *happy dance* WHOO HOO!!
*shifty eyes* Now...all you have to do is make Kyo and Yuki fall in love with eachother and it\'ll be a perfect arrangement...with lots o\' Yaoi lovin\'...but Tohru can be like me: a pervy yaoi fancier!! ^.^ Huzzah!
But do continue the story because it\'s SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good!! I mean, I left my last review after ch.2, and that\'s when I was hooked! But I\'ve spent he last few hours immersing myself in this loverly story...and it can\'t end just like that!! Write!! WRITE!! DO IT FOR YOUR ADORING FANS!! *pouty face* Mainly for me? Pwwwweeeeese?
person Tohru
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um, I would really appritiate it if you could please finish this story. You know, if its not to much trouble. And if you say that thats the ending I swaer I\'m gonna have to...well...lets just say I wont be very nice. Anyway, your doing a great job and keep up the good work.
person Lexa
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* I just stayed up all morning to read this. Or more like I was staying up all morning and randomly found this to read. Either way, very pleased. Not a big fan of trios, but you really did a great job of easing them into this. The scene in chap 15 was awsome and very well done. I cannot wait for more! Please please let me know when you update? *gives puppy dog eyes* And please update soon. I really really want to know how the rest of their weekend goes and their reactions when they wake up in the morning!
person LadyMoon
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best, if not the best FB fic, I have ever read. I hope you plan to contule this story futher, I can not wait to see what you have planed next. Please, please, update soon. Ja ne, for now. ^^
person Lauren
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice, i love it, please tell me the story isn\'t finished! i wannad mad more, and the karma sutra thing, ha how shigure like!

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