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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
are you going to make them fall for each other and or she gets pregnant!! Hahahahahahah!!! please email me your next chapter I can't wait to read more!!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cries that chapter 3 is taking so long* WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY??? WHY WONT CHAPTER 3 COME? WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY???
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! THERE GONE! THEY NEVER CAME BACK FROM THE GAY PRIDE PARADE! (I think me blowing up there float would of done it tho..) YAY THERE GONE!
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wsa he really going to kill himself because he couldn't get laid? Dude, talk about having messed up priorities! LOL
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nirvana: (applauds) you my friend, have talent!
The_Rock: yah, this is dafinatly going on Nirvana's favorits!
Duck_Hunter: who said you can tell Nirvana what hes gonna do huh?
The_Rock: I said thats who!
Nirvana: guys! guys!
(The_Rock and Duck_Hunter start fighting)
Nirvana: O.o?
The_Rock: LEGGO OF MY HAIR!
Duck_Hunter: OW! YOU BIT ME!
Nirvana: ..... (mumbles stuff about gay stalkers) KEEP WRITING! (throws shoe at Duck_Hunter and The_Rock)
The_Rock: yah, this is dafinatly going on Nirvana's favorits!
Duck_Hunter: who said you can tell Nirvana what hes gonna do huh?
The_Rock: I said thats who!
Nirvana: guys! guys!
(The_Rock and Duck_Hunter start fighting)
Nirvana: O.o?
The_Rock: LEGGO OF MY HAIR!
Duck_Hunter: OW! YOU BIT ME!
Nirvana: ..... (mumbles stuff about gay stalkers) KEEP WRITING! (throws shoe at Duck_Hunter and The_Rock)
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot. too many spelling mistakes though
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sexy!
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for a lemon
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the first erotic fan fiction I have ever read, but I enjoyed it a lot, and give it a 100 percent rating. Please do more!