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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sexy.The way you discribed the lust was excellent. i think you should have a sequel where she is pregnant
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eh, not bad actually. =)
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol that was good. very good. yumm
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! This was really something..
I know its sick, but its GREAT!
Are you going to write some more.. pweease
I know its sick, but its GREAT!
Are you going to write some more.. pweease
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow what a grate story good 2 see taht charizards forgotena bout charla and don scrwed a human ah ah ha neone whoflames tis is a moron cuz this is a real good story and teh grammer an spelign was perfict, u relly did put alot of time in2 tis fic huh
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! That was fucking nice!
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just E-mailed the author, and he said that he has a new chapter coming out soon, all he has to do is proofread it.
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm, decent story since there\'s not enought human/pokemon pairings. Unfortunately it loses quite a bit because of uncreative word choice. For instance you used abused too many times. Also, the woman has too many conflicting react. No. Now it may have been your desire to show that she was mentaly or emotionaly torn, but by having her feel one way in one sentance, the opposite in the next, and back again is just irritating. If you wanted her to be emotionaly conflicted, it would be better to state it explicitly, otherwise people assume the auther can\'t make up their mind, not the charecter. Hope this helps and good work. Best wishes on your future writting.