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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Sin)
nya... man i put typos like hell in there... the name is ment to be Din not sin ^^;
and i meant \"such a mean place to stop\" not please ^_^;
hope you update soon... if you are ^_^
nya... man i put typos like hell in there... the name is ment to be Din not sin ^^;
and i meant \"such a mean place to stop\" not please ^_^;
hope you update soon... if you are ^_^
schedule
April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NYA!!! i loved this ^_^
I liked the format, have the breaks where you had tham, gave it a great flow. Didnt make it boring to read like the normal layout does. nicely writen, appart from the typos ^^;
only prob......SUCH A MEAN PLEASE TO STOP >.
I liked the format, have the breaks where you had tham, gave it a great flow. Didnt make it boring to read like the normal layout does. nicely writen, appart from the typos ^^;
only prob......SUCH A MEAN PLEASE TO STOP >.
schedule
March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you still gonna continue this? If you are, please do soon! I love the way you made this fic go.... Kougaiji/Yaone fics seem almost perfect. They are truly one of the best couples ever. So good luck with the next chapter (if there is one coming) *winks*
schedule
February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s so hard to find a non-yaoi Saiyuuki fic these days. Definitely continue! The cliffhanger is so evil!
schedule
February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*enthralled* Just... wow. I don\'t have the words. Everyone is nicely in character.. The flow is great, very easy to read. There\'s enough detail to keep a body entertained, without boring one to death, and still vague enough to let reader\'s imaginations work a bit :) But for a few minor typos, this fic is excellent! With all that said, I just have one more thing to add..
PLEEEEEEEAAAASSE UPDATE SOON?!?!?! Pretty PRETTY Please with sugar on top!! *eyes all starry and hopeful*
PLEEEEEEEAAAASSE UPDATE SOON?!?!?! Pretty PRETTY Please with sugar on top!! *eyes all starry and hopeful*
schedule
December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::pouts:: There is more to this, right? It\'s very good, I hope you finish with the yummiable parts soon! ^.^
schedule
December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wai!!! how wonderful! You have held this fic nicely together, and kept them all in-character very well. My only reccomendation is to USE MORE DETAIL!!! Detail is your friend, remember! Make your characters suffer a bit if you have to ;). Anyway, nicely done and I can\'t wait for the update!
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