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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too bad I am behind the game in this fandom. *sighs*
This is very insightful. Nicely written.
This is very insightful. Nicely written.
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you ever will read this since it's been so long since you wrote this, but I want to tell you that I loved your story.
It was well paced, and beautiful. I loved how Gojyo knew that Hakkai (or Gonou in this case) knew he was attracted to him. Lovely work.
The jumbled letters that other reviewers have mentioned are not your fault. I've seen them in very, many of the older stories
here. It must have something to do with AFF.
It was well paced, and beautiful. I loved how Gojyo knew that Hakkai (or Gonou in this case) knew he was attracted to him. Lovely work.
The jumbled letters that other reviewers have mentioned are not your fault. I've seen them in very, many of the older stories
here. It must have something to do with AFF.
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great writing! I hope that it goes on, though it doesn\'t need to, but maybe you could just read back through for a couple of letter jumbles? then it would be perfect!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice one-shot. Elegant. There are just a couple of nonsense words that interrupt the flow; could you run a spell-check, please?
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work! I think your characterization of Gojyo is superb. Your writing style is clean, clear, and concise. Your word choices are deceptively simple and evoke a strong emotional response from the reader. Your piece is technically sound.
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww XD
Lovely job, I think you stayed very well in-character with Gojyo and Hakkai! :D It\'s a great interpretation <3
*psst* I\'m hoping you write more X3
Lovely job, I think you stayed very well in-character with Gojyo and Hakkai! :D It\'s a great interpretation <3
*psst* I\'m hoping you write more X3
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, quite good! keep it up! I\'d love to read more of this!
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is by far one of the best fics i have read in a while. Please continue!
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just beautiful, in its simplicity. Very well-written! Thanks for sharing this fic! I hope there is more!
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I loved this story. I can honestly say that this is the best Saiyuki fanfic I\'ve read to d I a I actually signed up here because I just HAD to review it! Can\'t wait for an update. *large grin* Wow.
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