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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice to see a yxa lemon w/out angst. the fandom needs more of it!!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, I definitely like!! It\'s not too serious, it has comedy and extremely hot sex, and Aya is a S-L-U-T!! Perfection!!! Please write more, I\'d love to see a lemon in an actual *bed* XD
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_< meheheheehhehee
Great story thus far. So, how long has Aya been wanting \'this kind of fun\' for? mehehehehehee Now I won\'t be able to have breakfast with my brother without laughing for a while (he simply ADORES strawberry jam on toast). Post the next chapter soon!
Great story thus far. So, how long has Aya been wanting \'this kind of fun\' for? mehehehehehee Now I won\'t be able to have breakfast with my brother without laughing for a while (he simply ADORES strawberry jam on toast). Post the next chapter soon!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. I like how this is going.. though of course, as you said, Aya\'s a OOC. But then it wouldn\'t be called fanfiction, ne? -_~ LOL, Omi\'s so fun to tease.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, just found this little gem and love love love it!!! there\'s some odd text glitches... but on the most part its readable and VERY entertaining... please update soon, later!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please write more.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww Poor Omi. So disturbed in so many ways now. >_<
I really like this so far. It\'s great. Hehehe. Keep on working on it! You\'re doing real good. n_n
I really like this so far. It\'s great. Hehehe. Keep on working on it! You\'re doing real good. n_n
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I liked your story, though I think you\'d like to run it through a spelling-checker before posting it =)
Overall it was a very enjoyable fic ^^ I like the way you slowly build up to a climax, no pun intented :p
Very cute and very real.
Overall it was a very enjoyable fic ^^ I like the way you slowly build up to a climax, no pun intented :p
Very cute and very real.
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great! I laughed the whole the time. You have the characters down pat!
Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for sharing!
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Write more!
Maybe angry Aya...Yoji is too angsty already lol...poor guy....dead lover complex....
Yes! More lemon! More yaoi!
Less jam! lol....i think that\'s what Aya would be mad about - the jam! lol.
Nah..more lemon...mm...lemony goodness..... ^______^.
okay. it\'s late im tired....im done...honest.....
GReat work so far! :)
Maybe angry Aya...Yoji is too angsty already lol...poor guy....dead lover complex....
Yes! More lemon! More yaoi!
Less jam! lol....i think that\'s what Aya would be mad about - the jam! lol.
Nah..more lemon...mm...lemony goodness..... ^______^.
okay. it\'s late im tired....im done...honest.....
GReat work so far! :)