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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad.. but.. never..ever use terms like \'love box\' or \'love juice\' in fanfiction. It looks so..lame and you know.. juvenile. Find better terms.
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was not bad for a first write some more
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February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn this story is soooo hot! I hope there could be another chapter to this or something similar. I wish there was a little more detail. B lik like it.
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with the outlaw star ns! ns! I just don\"t see enough of them