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for Time To End The Nightmare

by Archangel

person mikochef21
schedule April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That had to be one of the best Bebop fics I have ever read, (and I have read quite a few) I have always thought there should have been more to the story then \"BANG\". You did it with real class. Thank You Very Much ;)
person Darkrose Muse
schedule March 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
For a spike/faye fic this was not too bad. Personally, I absolutely dispise any love interest fan fiction about Spike/Faye as lovers. I don\'t know I just have never enjoyed reading such drivel that is so predicable with plots you can run a mak truck through. But this one had a fairly good ending to it so I\'ll give it points on trying to be original. The story was okay in regards to plot. But it was a little unSpike-like. I can;t see him acting that way. But the way you wrote Jet was awesome! that was definately on the money.

However I really liked the writing style! And the sex was very nicely done without getting to mushy or perverted. That was well done.

I give this fic 3 out of 5 stars. With room for improvement. Please try to write a bebop story that is more plausible. There is no doubt that your writing style is very good. but please try to branch out away from the obvisous themes. The spike/faye theme has just been overdone.
person Vegeta\'s angel
schedule March 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was the best ending I have ever read and it ended the same way it would have if it came on TV a JOB WELL DONE
person Vegeta's angel
schedule February 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
another cliff hanger, lol well any way I really like this story keep up the good work
person vegetasangel
schedule February 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow and that was a mean cliffhanger not fair not fair. Keep up the good work and update soon.
person Lone One
schedule January 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Verey good i like it! i like it alot! ^_^ nice! Ill keep checking for the updates t thi story...

~Th Lone One
person Quickening
schedule January 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was a MEAN cliffhanger! lol But this story rocks. Hope you'll post more of it soon. ^_^

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