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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude. This is so out of character I might cry. I love Vash/Meryl for all the reasons you shamelessly threw aside here. It felt like random porn....and first person really did not work. I know of no girl who ever has or ever will refer to herself as such: \"My violet coloured eyes ... my short thick ebony hair ... \" etc. I\'d be happy to work with you on a revised version of this; the story has potential, after all. But now, it\'s rushed, vague, -bland-; like a two paragraph plot that was never really fleshed out.
Like I said, please email me. We\'ll talk.
Like I said, please email me. We\'ll talk.
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic was awsome you could easily make a another I\'d read it
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
not much personalto tto the characters, which made it a less fulfilling read. things went too quickly and seemed fake. when writing a fic about two characters it\'s better to let the actual characters shine through rather than making it like a carbon-copy story where their names were filled in the blanks. if you\'re not good atpingping people in-character, then at least work on making things flow more and seem less stilted and rushed.
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! *sob!* that was so beautiful! *sob* I want to know if you\'re making a sequal when Meryl gives birth. ^_~ Please do it as a request from me!
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! *sob!* that was so beautiful! *sob* I want to know if you\'re making a sequal when Meryl gives birth. ^_~ Please do it as a request from me!
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this alot!! It is soo cute...and I love Meryl!! hehehe...I have not seen all of Trigun yet but..I have read the manga!! and i just love Vash...it was good i liked it alot!! You have much talent!!
bai bai
Crickit!
bai bai
Crickit!
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EmpressGalaxia\'s review x2. I totally agree with her, couldn\'t have said it better myself...so I won\'t waste my time.
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet, a nice fic to read. But you overused the names a bit, cut out a few of the vash and meryl words and it will be perfect.
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice. You managed to keep them both relitively in characterr, which for any lemon is crutial.
So if they are getting married, does that mean that Meryl will take Vash\'s name as well? and if so what will that be? Meryl the Stampede?
So if they are getting married, does that mean that Meryl will take Vash\'s name as well? and if so what will that be? Meryl the Stampede?