rate_review Reviews

O.o;

Mou~ This was the first Sanzo/Goyjo fic I've ever read..

Damn.

I want more...

e_e

That was beautifully wen. en. I very much enjoyed the look into Sanzo\'s character even in a one shot lemon. It takes a certain skill to write a lemon that *sexy* and still have a look into the character\'s head. I think you executed all of the characters beautifully, and I was especially pleased with the idea of Hakkai vs. Gojyo as far as comparing bed-partners went. I\'d be interested to see a second lemon with Sanzo and Hakkai, if for nothing else but to see how you\'d execute his frustration with being \"gentle.\"

I wonder, is Hakkai violent ever, with Gojyo? It\'d be interesting to see you give that lemon a shot as well.

Anyway, I just thought you should know that this is one of the most thoughtfully written smutfics I\'ve read in quite a while, if not the most thoughtful and insightful Saiyuki smut. Please, keep up the good work.

-Jessica Neko

Good story... Only one question: You\'d mensioned everybody but Goku - where\'s he???
Best Wishes. 8D

ooh! rough sex~~~ and Sanzo is the seme too? HOT!! great fic~~!! when are Gojyo and Sanzo gonna play again? I wanna see that~!