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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this. Don\'t make ryo to be a pervert. He can love both women can\'t he??? Maybe have the guys watch them all together.
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to do more chapters??? You can't make ryo out to be a pervert. That's not him. Why not have sage or rowan or both of them join in! Write more
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Where is the lemon? Other than that, it was a very short fic. Great though.
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Boy . You could have wrote more. Gee He finishs Kayrua and then Mia. He could have had mia first.
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December 14, 2002 at 12:00 AM
The premise is a little simplistic, but the hypnotic induction was one of the better ones I've seen.