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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome! Millerna x Hitomi is hot. Van x Merle is hot. Millerna x Hitomi x Merle is even hotter, woo!
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The first four chapters are really good. The fifth is kinda ehh..
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June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, the first four chapters were good, but this fifth chapter was total crap. Merle is way too experienced in it. If I were you I\'d take it down and do a complete rewrite in which Merle is totally clueless on the lesbian aspect and having no knowledge on how to pleasure Hitomi and Millerna.