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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was very sweet! I liked how it wasn't overly cliche as far as the sex went. It was very believable, and it appears you know Lantis' character very well. The only thing I would recommend is getting a proofreader who is a native speaker of English. You've got a few grammatical errors and things.
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so adorable! The harshness of the word you use for the title is a sharp contrast to how romantic and adorable this story is but it works well in an odd way. Am I making sense? Well at any rate this is a very cute story! I love it!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful lemon. You kept true to Hikaru's character while making her seem different at the same time. ANd I loved that ending. Hope to read more greatness from you one day.
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really really good. do u have any others?
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Phew..Nice