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The story is going great, but what happened to chanpter six? It's not there at all, what happened?

This is a rather intersting take on season two's events with the Seyruun family. I'm curious to see more it is very enjoyable but it is sad that you have not updated in a long time...Please update! I would offer your desired form of chocolate if I could some how send them via this review! ^_^

i really like it. my only complaint is that chapter six is missing!!!!

fix, and update :)

YOU WANT CHOCOLATE???? HERE HAVE A TRUCK LOAD!!!! JUST FINSIH THIS!!!!!
don\'t make me come and find you. will i have ta force feed the chocolate? its such a great story!!! and how i adore amelia zel pairings! its BEAUTIFUL.
finish it!!! i am begging you!!!!
much love
eddie

I have found this story to be both well-collected and original. Your writing style is very neat and you evoke an atmosphere only rarely found in even the best stories. The use of such familiar characters in original roles is inspiring to see, hopefully more such works will be found in these late days of childish scrawls too-oft abandoned in favor of the next. Leaving me all too often in tears over the pale glimmers of talent that began to shine when even a select few take the time to actually re-review thier work and find the weaknesses that lay within. I see much promise in your style, I would greatly enjoy reading more! (hint, hint)

My hat is off to you, gentle scribe!

Myahh!! Where\'s the rest? ;.; I really like this story, it\'s got plot and backstory and stuff, so it\'s not just sex and nothing else. I like that. it\'s worth reading! ^_^ Please write more soon!

Augh! I followed this over from FF.net, and alas! It ends so soon! ;--; I absolutely love this story, Amelia is adorable, and I love how you portray Zelgadiss *insert happy fangirl noises*. It\'s been a long time since I\'ve been an open fan of seriseries, but this is definately sweet stuff. *showers dark chocolate and olatolate chip cookies on the Ryo* I *so* want to draw pictures for this, my fingers are nearly itching. *happy sigh* Awesome stuff, miss. But peeeaeeease update soon. T--T *bows, and bounds away*

I really like your story. Everything fits together well, and the way you portray Amelia and Zelgadis is excellent. I think it\'s nice that he\'s not always after his cure. They\'re very real people in this story. Also, do you think sometime you could actually write about the stuff they\'re doing? Keep up the good work. ^_^

>>\"Ummm... Zelgadiss-sama...?\" \"...what am I supposed to do now?\"<<

Priceless! Classic. I love it.

I\'m kicking myself for not having read this before now, and I really do hope you finish it. It\'s a good story all on its own. The setting, the reworking and retelling of the characters -- it\'s facinating.

>>\"Ummm... Zelgadiss-sama...?\" \"...what am I supposed to do now?\"--

Priceless! Classic. I love it.

I\'m kicking myself for not having read this before now, and I really do hope you finish it. It\'s a good story all on its own. The setting, the reworking and retelling of the characters -- it\'s facinating.