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for Innocent Seduction

by froop

person sdaf
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
Perhaps next time we can see some of that Shinji/Misato or Shinji/Ritsuko. Or perhaps both?
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
To the reviewer before me: Who gives a fuck about Touji?

To the creator: This fic is probably the best one recently. I hope you continue with it. ShinjixEveryFemaleCharacter FTW!!!
person 94saturn
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two.

LOL This is great stuff! I really liked the Misato flashback. My only disappointment is you didn’t include a Shinji, Hikari and Asuka threesome. But I haven’t read chapter three yet so maybe I / they might get lucky.

Chapter three didn’t appeal to me as much as the first two. Some how having Shinji of all people screw another mans bride seemed wrong even to this perverted son-of-a bitch; but the sex was hot and satisfying!

I think this story deserves two more chapters if you’re willing to write them. May I suggest in chapter four Hikari and Asuka perform for Shinji then let him join the fun. Then in chapter five have Hikari and Asuka perform for Shinji and Toji followed by Asuka teaching Toji how to perform his duty as a husband while Hikari gets another dose of Shinji.


DC (94saturn)
person 94saturn
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You did a great job setting up a plausible premise; the old bored housewife works every time. The sex well written too!

I hope to finish reading the rest of the chapters soon.

Well done!

DC (94saturn)
person I WUV YOU
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you heard right, marry me right now! Unless you're a guy, then I'll buy you some porn.
person Ominae
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's it?

NOOO!!! I really, really liked the story....
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see Shinji's memories of his shagging with Maya, Ritsuko and one of his college teachers you say eh?
person Alex.M
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say you really are a good writer, because this is one of the most erotic story in this whole net. I was wondering also if you could like put Shinji having sex with Maya, Ritsuko, Rei and a reunion with Misato. But pretty much even with out them this is still a great story worth reading and I give it a five out of five. Also please update soon because many people are getting flamed because of the lack of updating and I really hated it when good writers get flamed. So update soon.
person Mic123
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, and ya your right bout the Hikari/ Sinji ficks lol, its all bout Sinji/ Rei or Sinji/ Asuka lol nice change for once lol exelently done a must read lol
person Brian,Dark Emotionless Shadow
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was the hottest erotic s/h peice I saw here.
The Omakes were class as well
Specially the second one ^^

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