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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I didn\'t read all of this fic yet and I won\'t until you change one thing. Make EVERY TIME a new character speaks a new paragraph. It\'s the grammar rule most often forgotten by new authors. Once you fix it I\'ll read this story. ^^
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Not just the pairings but the story itself. Great story. More please! ^^
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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Very good, i like it... here i was expecting a fight already but they grabbed the girls and ran... funny. Well i am without a doubt looking forward to an updat okay?