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for Teenangel and the Demon Called Hormones

by QeQue

person cory
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello. I really like the story, and the lemons are wonderful. I\'m glad to hear that some plot is in development, I always like plot too... One thing I noticed is that I am not fluent in Japanese (not even close) and I just didn\'t feel like googling all the terms you keep using. Maybe at the end of the chapters you could include the definitions for myself (and any others) who do not know those particular phrases? But your descriptive style is amazing, and I am looking forward to the next installment.
person DL
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad yo see you updated.
Ja ne
person Sak`
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wah i love your fic it\'s great feels like there is going to be many humiliating scense for poor hisoka <3<3 please update it soon cant wait to read the rest
person Chi
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! Really well written and thought out, even if there were some spelling and grammar errors. I thought that you kept them very in character, except in Hisoka\'s dreams... But, they were dreams, and nobody\'s really in character in dreams. :D

I hope you continue this!
person rose
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Liked it. Please keep it up :)
person Crayon
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was awesome i hope you write more soon! To tell you the truth i think you are a great writer and Im
looking fowarded to reading more fictions by you! SEE YA! :)
person shuchan
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe *evil grin* sika chan\'s had his first wet dream...! oooh, how embarassing!!! i wish for a sequel... *sniff*
person shin
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute
person crimson
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!! the second chapter stopped short. o__o; what happened?! noo *clings to fic*
person jon
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yes, yes, YES!!!! Write more, pleaseeee!!!! This is a really good one. I really like the style you are writing.

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