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for Sweet Little China Doll

by annonymouse

person af
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why does everyone refer to H as a china doll? O_O I'm just curious...The dolls M had were pretty much European-looking...
person Cindyip
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, dark and unsettling. Me like=^_^=
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this was such a wonderful story. Poor wittle Hisoka-chan. *huggles him* Mean ol\' Muraki. *bites Muraki* Anyway, that was a great story. I\'m gonna print it off! ^__~ Nice job, hun. ^__^
person KittyKristi
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly well written, ah, such inspiration! -bows to you- Well done, thank you for sharing this.

\"Scream at me as I scratch your face.\" I think this was my favorite line, original and poetic. Nice. ;)

Um, let\'s see.. My one problem with it was \"Shall\", but that\'s it. I\'ve always been sort of bothered by the use of \"shall\" though, so don\'t worry about it, it\'s a personal opinion, I think.

But keep keep writing, long time! XD
person lilmissmaya
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
odie et amo, I think is a title of a love poem in latin... I don\'t have my book with me... but I think that\'s it..
person Legendary Dream Girl
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I loved your story! Poor Hisoka-san though.....it\'s not fair that he\'s always being totured by Muraki.
person Toruko
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was great. I\'m going to have to add it to my reccomendations. -nods- Very disturbing. Very...Muraki. It totally leaves me hanging.

I\'m like thinking, \"AH, I wanna see Tsuzuki\'s reaction! DARNIT!\"

Keep writing!

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