rate_review Reviews

I liked it a lot ^^. There was so much description, emotion, and ahh...it was just written so well; though there were quite a few spelling errors in which I suggest you correct and look out for in future chapters. I do hope you continue...please, soon.

WAHHHH!!!! u need to finish!! *cries* will hisoka be ok. is the lemon gonna be sicke flu fluffy or not?... so many questions so little text!!!!

WHY\'DE YOU STOP THERE YOU BIG MEANIE...you should write more

A lovely little piece of writing here. Very evocative, the emotion is very sharp and... vibrating. Please, please, PLEASE write it into a lemon! PLEASE! Good porn is so hard to come by....... >.>; And this is really good! With porn potential!
*ahem* Yes, well, good job, and keep it up, ne?

Aww...poor Hisoka...and Tsuzuki too for that matter :(

Oh yes! You should deffy continue with this, It\'s such a good start!!
You really should continue with it :D
<33 Tsu + and Hisoka

I\'d like to see it longer, definitely. It\'s a good start with the interaction b/t Tsuzuki and Hisoka, even if I don\'t really think Tsuzuki would force his emotions on Hisoka like that. Then again, a frustrated Tsuzuki who doesn\'t know how else to break through his partner\'s no-touchy shell might resort to underhand tactics... Well, no, I still don\'t see it, but you could definitely argue that angle, and I\'m always willing to read well-written Yami fics, so keep going. Length and depth of plot can only improve it. I like the way you\'ve managed to capture some of what fangirls love about their interaction--Soka\'s hidden smile, Tsuzuki\'s teasing \'cute\' observation, Soka chiding Tsuzfor for being a glutton. We *love* the fluffy Tsusoka. ^^ So...more, onegai shimasu. Suki desu.

I know this will be no more than a fangirl squee, but I can\'t help it and I *must* let you know that ...

OMG!!!1111 I LOVE TIHS STORY IT\'S SO GOOD!!!!!ONEONE
LIEK, TSU/SOKP!!!P!!!!!!1ONEONEONE111 PLEASE RITE MORE!!!!

kthnxbai.

p.s.: ;) I\'m serious, though. I loved it. Please, continue.

I *really* like this beginning, and I\'d love it if you turned it into a fic!!

Fluffy so far but not bad at all.
So, when\'s next???? ^.^
Best Wishes. XD