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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Extremely well-written. Left a knot in my throat. Very well done!
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is it the format used here or something else, somehow the spelling in some areas got messed up a bit? It's a DAMN SHAME too, 'cause I know how great this story is and what an excellent writer you are but someone reading this for the first time might wonder and give it a lower rating. Hope to see more from you soon.
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for so many hits you have a pitiful amount of reviews! silly people! although, this is such a beautiful and heartbreaking story maybe people don't know what to say..
anyways, it was very VERY good. I'll be hunting around for your other work.
anyways, it was very VERY good. I'll be hunting around for your other work.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heartbreaking, but beautifully written. I loved this.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how about a souji x tetsunosuke pairing? i know his a minor...but the pairing is kinda cute.........its like okita is tetsu\'s gude to life......his like a mature errr \'woman\' with her calm but bubbly personality as oppose to young tetsu\'s fiery and loud self...why not think about it..sure its not yet popular but its something different...fresh........i mean a like the other pairngs don\'t get me wrong..but they\'re kinda boring now.....i\'ve been reading fanfics for ages....i notice there isn\'t a variety anymore.........readers are very curious and sparks interestnwhen presented with unused..........unseen paring...ehehehe....i read one fanfcis of this pairing!it got me hook so i\'m lookkng for more of this pairing...so if u\'d like to send me ur opinion please email me at konoha_ninja3888@yahoo.com.au (no flames pls)......thanks! XD
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... *wipes away tears* You made me cry. *Bows deeply* Your story is very, very good, and I absolutely love it. There are only a few writers who can bring me to tears, and now you are one of them. That was so sad, but so sweet. Keep up the good work.
--Analia
--Analia
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, this was so sad!! but also happy because they are together now! i felt so bad when souji asked \"Am I really so awful that you want to spare Tetsu-kun from becoming like me?\" i just wanted to cry!!!!!
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU made me cry. That\'s so wonderful...the most beautiful and saddest story about HijikataxOkita I\'ve read so far. Poor, poor guys T-T (cries again)
Lok
Lok
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear...I almost did the sniffly thing with that one...:)
That was a very touching and well-written story. I enjoyed the all the little details such as Hijikata cutting his hair, and the bandit that Okita killed, though of course I\'m not sure if those are historical fact or your own creation.
Sweet and tender, there\'s just so much tragedy in that whole period of history to write about. Still, you did a wonderful job of it.
That was a very touching and well-written story. I enjoyed the all the little details such as Hijikata cutting his hair, and the bandit that Okita killed, though of course I\'m not sure if those are historical fact or your own creation.
Sweet and tender, there\'s just so much tragedy in that whole period of history to write about. Still, you did a wonderful job of it.
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull story!
I love PMK! The part, in which Souji dies ist really sad...but in the end it\'s a Happy End so I wasn\'t to sad at all!
For I\'m only learnig english in school I\'m not abel to say something about language or mistakes but the plot was really good!
Nanael §^-^§
I love PMK! The part, in which Souji dies ist really sad...but in the end it\'s a Happy End so I wasn\'t to sad at all!
For I\'m only learnig english in school I\'m not abel to say something about language or mistakes but the plot was really good!
Nanael §^-^§