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for Gangs and Love

by pirate

person YO mama
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first off. You make your chapters too long, that was a bitch getting through. It was immature and not very descriptive. And not every one wears baggy pants and a dragon on their shirt, that's just tacky, they're supposed to wear tight pants anyways. Plus, everyone doesn't wants to hear abut their clothing. And another thing, where's the sex?? This is adult fanfiction, why not post that on the regular fanfiction.....
person Ana Morphin
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI!! love your work! but, well, i have a feeling that the story didn\'t really end there last time i read it, it was when sakura was having a tatoo i think, but then again it could\'ve just been me, anyway, PLS, I BEG YOU, WRITE THE CONTINUATION AND POST IS AS SOON AS YOU CAN, IM ON MY KNEES RYT NOW!!! thanks, and take care always!!!!!!
person alien*ryoko
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
luv it . wanna read more. plz update soon. =~___-=v
ryoko-chan =^__________^=
person Yukiko-chan
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is really cool! Are you a male or a female? I mean, I can understand if you\'re a female but if you\'re a male, you\'re really good in writing a romance story! Well, keep up the good work! I\'ll be waiting for upcoming chaps!!!

Yours truely,
Yukiko-chan (Snow child)

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