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for Treason and trust

by obsidiara

schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Falcon: Naa! ^_^ They\'re together again! But... What about Osamu? Ken-chan, you had better stay with Daisu-chan and if you dare get scared and don\'t bother going to an adult for help, I will... stop loving you for a week!

Ken: Is that supposed to be a bad thing? o.O

Daisuke: Naa. I agree with her for once!

Falcon: Well done! ^_^ I still love thisry, ry, and I can\'t wait for more! ^_^
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh... Evertiontion has it\'s consequence, and this is no exception, is it? ^^;; I liked how Daisu-chan silently threatened Jun. She should have waited and made sure the facts were straight, stupid girl! Anyway, still good. Let\'s see the next chapy, ne?
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As Takato\'s mother puts it... Oh deard!!rd!!! -covers face- Ech... Hate incest... But... It at least gives Daisuke to think about... as well as another reason to (Angel\'s voice from \'Smile Time\') \'kick his ass all the way back to Hell.\' ^^;; Eh..... The lemon itself is good, though, despite it was incest. But I\'ll live. Poor Daisu-chan. Mind if I join you to vomit?

Good work still. Now for chapter 18.
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Falcon: Yes! Together again, and a kiss! PLEASE OH PLEASE LISTEN TO HIM, KEN-TENCHI!!!

Ken: Falcon, you\'re scaring people. o.O

Daisuke: Yeah... Like us, for example... o_O;;

Falcon: Sowwies. ^^;; Anyway, good chapter. And I\'m so happy that Ken still feels lonely without Daisuke. That means that the two still have a chance for love! Please, oh please update again soon!!!!
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.... You\'ve caught my attention. Let\'s go on to chapter 2, shall we. ^^
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nuu!!!! Daisuke, don\'t do it! Osamu is evil! ~blinks~ But then again, Daisuke and Ken will be together. ^_^ Good so far.
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh.... bit of a cliffy here. At least the next chapters are already up! ^_^ Anyway, this was pretty good. I liked how Daisuke kinda just lost to his darker intentions, but still loved Ken in the end. Poor, poor, Daisu-chan.
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Sweet and fluffy with Daisu-chan b Ken Ken-tenchi\'s hero and all. ^_^ I liked this chapy. Now I really want for Daisu-chan and Ken-tenchi to have a happy ending. And if you haven\'t guessed it yet, one of my worst habis ris reviewing EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER! ^_^;; hehe. Ato de, and good work! ^_~
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... At least Ken is truly aware of his situation though. Now all he needs is to be strong and ask for help! ^_^ Good chapy, and more fluff! I loved it. ^_^ Good work still.
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Osamu, no!!! Daisu-chan, save Ken-tenchi!!! I like how Daisuke and Jun are sorta getting along, tho. Good work. Now for the next chapter.

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