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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Osamu, he\'s your brother! B-R-O-T-H-E-R!!! BROTHER!!!
Eh heh... ^^;; Incest really bothers me after watching Wrong Turn and Deliverance. Anyhoo, what is with Ichijouji-san? She\'s so freaking oblivious! Not very caring, either. But then, she was like that in the show, too. Anyhoo, still pretty good. Must read more now. ^_^
Eh heh... ^^;; Incest really bothers me after watching Wrong Turn and Deliverance. Anyhoo, what is with Ichijouji-san? She\'s so freaking oblivious! Not very caring, either. But then, she was like that in the show, too. Anyhoo, still pretty good. Must read more now. ^_^
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no.... Daisu-chan and Ken-tenchi finally get to play the super happy game, and Osamu\'s gonna ruin it!!! ~cries~ Anyway, I loved how the kisses were described, particularly, and my favourite lin in this chapter was \"Whatever happened before it doesn’t co For For me you are the purest thing on earth.\" ^_^ Daisu-chan, you\'re just so sweet! ^_^ Anyhoo, once again it is good work. Now for the next chapy. ^_^
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... It was cute when Ken-tenchi sneezed. ^_^ But damn you, Osamu! Don\'t mess with such a perfect couple! And you, Taichi! You should know better than to be helping the prostitution of a minor!!! Anyways, Good work. ^_^
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~growls~ Get your dirty, incestive hands off of Ken-tenchi, Osamu-akurei!!!
Eh heh. ^^;; Well, I don\'t know how he plans to split these two up, considering how sweet Daisuke is once you get past the his... uh... aroused side. Anyway, This is still pretty good.
Eh heh. ^^;; Well, I don\'t know how he plans to split these two up, considering how sweet Daisuke is once you get past the his... uh... aroused side. Anyway, This is still pretty good.
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Osamu, as always you are absolutely evil! And as for you, Taichi. You\'re a heartless bastard! anyway, to the author, I still am enjoying this fic, despite my rants towards Osamu and Taichi. There\'re some grammar problems, but whateva. So I\'ll go onto chapter 13 now.
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tai, you\'re a freakin\' rapist, you know that! And Osamu... You have a sick mind!
As for the story itself, it\'s still great. Dark and twisted and angsty (have I mentioned that I LOVE angst? ^^;;) So I\'m still gonna keep reading, because now I just HAVE to know what happens!
As for the story itself, it\'s still great. Dark and twisted and angsty (have I mentioned that I LOVE angst? ^^;;) So I\'m still gonna keep reading, because now I just HAVE to know what happens!
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah hah! Thank goodness for Daisu-chan\'s stubborness! But my poor little Ken-tenchi. ~huggles Ken~ Don\'t cry. It\'s all a misunderstanding!
So Daisuke\'s gonna even the score? Hehehe. I have to see what he does. >:D
So Daisuke\'s gonna even the score? Hehehe. I have to see what he does. >:D
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Taichi, enough! Daisu-chan is not yours!!! Leave him alone and quit spreading lies about poor Ken-tenchi!
Now that I\'ve been waiting for Daisuke to really hit Osamu, and it finally happened! ^_^ And my favourite line in this chapter is \"I fear I’ve knocked him out.” So has Daisu-chan finally won? Will he tell Ken-tenchi what happened? I hope so. ^_^
Now that I\'ve been waiting for Daisuke to really hit Osamu, and it finally happened! ^_^ And my favourite line in this chapter is \"I fear I’ve knocked him out.” So has Daisu-chan finally won? Will he tell Ken-tenchi what happened? I hope so. ^_^
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story, though somewhat disturbing, is quite intriguing. I like the dark look on Osamu and Ke rel relationship, and Daisus ats attitude towards Osamu is quite interesting. Grammar should receive a bit more attention, as some of the sentences tend to be misstyped. Otherwise, good work.
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t even begin to say what a honour it is to be complimented by one of my favorite writers. I am truly honoured. I will finish very soon the story. I hope to see your story finished soon...maybe after we are both done we could do a story together ^_^