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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I mus say that even though the character's were not really like they were in the anime, it was still a very well written story... please write a sequel... email me if you do =)
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I enjoyed this. LoL
This one was much better than some other NW stories I've read. ^_^ Good job!
This one was much better than some other NW stories I've read. ^_^ Good job!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
they were NOT out of character! *grumbling*
you should SO do a sequel based on Cain\'s hopes there (\'one day Shido would tire of the human world & return to him)
-say Shido returns to find Yayoi dead & Riho left in the sun the way the vengeful breeds had tried to do to him (they\'re torturing him by destroying those he loves) & the only thing his scarred mind & emotions lead him to do is seek solace with.... DundadunDUN -Blondie.
^_^
why don\'t i write it myself, u ask?
because i\'m lazy! ^_~
you should SO do a sequel based on Cain\'s hopes there (\'one day Shido would tire of the human world & return to him)
-say Shido returns to find Yayoi dead & Riho left in the sun the way the vengeful breeds had tried to do to him (they\'re torturing him by destroying those he loves) & the only thing his scarred mind & emotions lead him to do is seek solace with.... DundadunDUN -Blondie.
^_^
why don\'t i write it myself, u ask?
because i\'m lazy! ^_~
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHEE! No matter how OOC they were it was awesome ::will now have wonderful slashy dreams of Cain and Shido:: :) Very good write!! ^___^
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful fiction. <3
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I never write reviews for anything, because I either gush or I nitpick, but I haven\'t read any really good yaoi in a while (maybe becuase I\'ve basically read it all... >.<), and I think this deserved a happy li\'l review. Anyway, you\'re a very good writer, and unlike just about everything else I\'ve read lately, there was nothing I had to read six times over to understand. I think the best way to describe your writing style is smooth, and I really appreciate that. ^.^* It doesn\'t hurt my head to read! And they weren\'t... too... out of character... except for some reason I gave Shido Shuichi\'s (from Gravi,no dno da) voice when he was being all cute and childish. ^w^ But I suppose that\'s my fault, not yours... oh dear... better shut up now... Anyway, keep up the good work!
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK! My review went poof! And it was really long, too... Umm... anyway, I said that your writing style was really plea and and that I liked the story bla bla bla... sorry for the Cliff\'s Notes version, but, what the hey, I don\'t have the memory, nor the patience, for rewriting that whole thing... Graaa.... (Gra? O.o)
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February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As the Furbies once said.........Yu-ummmmmmmmmmmmm....................
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, they were out of character. BUT SO WHAT! Cain was sooo sweeet and cuddly and nice anddo wdo was all stubborn then...\"TAKE ME!\" Bahahaha you really have a talent when it comes to writing! I liked all the \"I want to run to you and run away at the same time.\" kinda stuff.Brilliant.