rate_review Reviews

Ack! I agree with the other reviews! Great story concept, horrible grammatical exectution. I hardly finished reading soley due to the spectacular lack of grammar. This is worth a rewrite though, so please work through the problems and bring it back!

You really, really need to use quotation marks. It\'s hard to tell when someone\'s speaking otherwise. Great concept, but the execution could use a little tweaking.

Well, as far as I can tell, you\'re writing an X-Men-G-Force Crossover. Nifty-cool, there aren\'t very many of those in the world. Unfortunately, your fic is seriously lacking of grammatical refinement. You need to go back and correct these things: the complete lack of quotation marks for the characters\' dialogue, bad spelling, misplaced or missing punctuation, and paragraph breaks. I had a hell of a time reading this because the story\'s construction was frigged up so badly, it was hard to tell what exactly was going on. A creative writing course would do wonders for you. Go in peace and may the force be with you.