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for The Devil Wears a Pinstriped Suit

by Sosoru

schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, thanks for the tips that you included in the story... i hope i get to use them one day. Geez! This fic is so DAMN twisted!... i like... >:) Mwahahahahaha!
Can you please update a little faster? it seems that it has been months since you last updated...
Your fic has a distinct plot, unlike any other that i've read before. And geez! i was laughing my pants off!
'Hey hun, i fucked Kaoru's brains out!', 'You raise your voice at me again and i swear i'll pull your testicles out of their sockets and use them as earrings!'.
Man, i love this fic! So please continue writing!
Since i'm you havent updated this yet, i'm gonna read your other fic, Spy Versus Spy?
Oh, and by the way, i would be happy to help you out in proofreading. Though, this would be my first time in proofreading something i didn't write, so you might want someone else more experienced for the job. But anyway, it's up to you! i'm just offering what i can!
You can contact me via e-mail:
dark_sapphire_witch@yahoo.com
Please do write more! i can't wait for the turn of events!
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad you updated! please dont leave us hanging for such a long time. i've been following this fic for quite some time now ^___^ <3 it
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I haven't read a KK story with so much twist in a long time. The funniest parts I have to say is when the **** hits the fan and they actualy react how we would. You have got to keep this up! As they say i will never forgive you if you don't.
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! SAITO!!! ^_^ Just when things got interesting, in comes the most badass anti-hero in anime! WOOOOOT!! Please update soon or I will send my legion of impatient evil chibis to attack you. lol
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay update!! I thought you had forgotten about us over here at AFF. Bu I'm glad you didn't. Uhm, the chapter was a little long, which I like, but everything is just unfolding! i want to know more! What the funk is going on?!?! Everyone's all linked in some way!! And maybe a lemon sometime soon??! And Kenshin is going to divorce Tomoe?? Hahahaha can't wait til the next chapter. I will wait patiently as always. Hopw I don't have to wait long though.... I know life can be busy.

BYYE
person Kiziku
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! Please update soon Im on the edge of my seat here D:!
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is soooo damn good... I love how the story evolves. I'm begging you to finish... please!

PS: The way you describe the sex scenes is absolutely amazing.
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I hope you update soon. This story is really one of true quality work & I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more & awaiting what happens.
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update soon! i love your story.
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And not even an explanation as to why it took so long. Oh well shit and life happens and this was a fairly decent chapter I suppose. Though it'd be nice if you could spoil us with a longer chapter every now and then. I'm very interested in finding out what happens next and befitting to the last line of the chapter patience just so happens to be one of my strong points. Until then.

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