rate_review Reviews

Yo

I was never one for reviewing but I just felt I had to. I have been reading the fic for a while and it just blew me away. I mean I know it\'s chalk full of lemons(What\'s a fic without a little citris ne?) but it also has an AMAZING plot. This fic and select few others are my favorite. I especially love the first chapter. After the first few sentences I was hooked. And I totally agree with one of the reviewers that Kaoru\'s vocabulary is awesome. I love it! ^^ It\'s very hard to find good stories like this because other fics out there just say the same thing over and over again and it get boring after a while. So I\'m glad that this fic is here. Yeah...XD

Uhm...Keep up the good work I cannot ( litterally cannot ) wait for the next update ^^

Ja! (^_^)v

Wow, you are awesome! I\'m not one for reviewing very often. But wanted to give much credit, where credit is due.

Dawn

gads... hadn\'t got laid in eons? that was classic... i nearly fell off my chair with that one... you are great! :)

damn!! you needa give me more than that woman! omg. that was good... that was a quick read though... what a pity. i do love this story.

Aloha! *for the second time*

Ya know I just thought of a song that might be perfect for this Fic. Maybe it would help you if you have any inspirational drops..

\"Criminal\" by Fiona Apple... Just random thought...yea.. well keep writting girl! I love it!

I think that your fanfiction, "The Devil Wears a Pinstriped Suit" is very excellent! I almost jumped out of my chair everytime I thought Kenshin was going to get caught by his wife! I think that the time and effort u put into writing this fanfiction was very well spent. XD-luv_hyde.

wow, that was nice , kaorus vocabulary is amazing, you know , but, apart from taht , the sarcasm on every wor she speaks is what i like about this fic, the case is turning interesting, even if the k/k relathiophiop is the main topic of the story and how both of them deal with it (and even if i was willing to hear kenshin saying i love u to kaoru again and see her reaction once more) the trial is capturing my attntion too, so hope to get more updates soon , the fic is going great by the way, id just sugest one litle thing that is my own opinion and if you want to go on with your fic as it is i will still read it eagerlylol, however, my piece of advise is this: avoid writing in the present tense, it just ruins slightly a very good piece pf work, but if u like it and if its good for the swapping of narrators then go on with it , ah , by the way ., that changing from one narrator to kaoru herself telling tthe story is reat hehee well , hope to get an update soon , luck
kao!

as usual, you leave in annoyingly nail biting suspense... I think we all as fanfic writers are hit with the \"Cliffie-ngi-itis\" virus. Update soon!!! Keep it up! :)

Just had to write this in here somewhere - LOVE THIS STORY! can\'t get enough of it >.< I swear lol I guess I am a small Hentai like everyone else :P haha~ Keep up the good work :) once again - loving it :)

what the hell took you sooooooooooo long?i thought that you were dead!dont do this again please!anyway the chapter was great!update sooooon