rate_review Reviews

Heyo!
First i'd like to say that you are awesome and I love this story to peices. Your RK fic is the ONLY one I read and sadly is the one that is updated not so often. So I always starve for another chapter. Hehehe

And second, I don't think I've reviewed your story as each chapter was added but I think it;s about damn time that I do. I'm stuck here on a cliff with major suspense and you promised we wouldn't have to wait that long for another chapter. But haha, I can wait as long as it takes.

And last, I was reading a couple reviews and I spotted the last two. I say ignore the crap outta that person. I agree with what you said about Beyonce! I thought it was friggin hilarious what you said. I can honestly sit here and tell you that as a black women I am truely NOT offended by what you said. Because well, it's true hahaha!! So, keep up the good work and keep the Beyonce jokes comin! =D

I seriously hope your fucking black after that little comment on Beyonce. If I find out your another stupid little white girl. I file for abuse on this site bitch. And if you are black your fuckin brave to say some shit like bcuz their our black girls that read these storiesand our very offended, I personally dont like Beyonce but even other races wouldnt say that shit. Change that part in your story or Ill tell the site manager!! Im sorry that I put this in review form but you hid your damn email! Hmmm I wonder why???


If you have anything to say to me email me under my sisters pen-name on A single spark "Soul of a Woman"

I apoligize for my sister Kelly. What you said was wrong but she is deeply offended and probably wont read any of your stories again. I love this story Ive followed it since you started it, and Ill admit it that when I read that part on Beyonce and hair weaves my jaw clenches and my mood changes.
Well sorry again maybe you should change it...

Well anyway that pen-name that my sister gave you is mine and you cant reach her on it I dont know why she gave it to you, just ignore it. But if you really need to reach her then Ill let her know


Sharr Martelle aka "Soul of a Woman" Oh yeah keep up that good work on this story LOL!!!

Love the drama unfolding! Pls update soon!

its really good. i look forward to reading more soon.

Okay, I just read Chapter 19.

Way to twist this thing around tighter than a coiled phone cord! I love how this chapter turned out, and especially how it ended. I laughed. I'm honest, I laughed at the end of the chapter.

I know that the crap's about to get deeper and deeper and more of it's hitting the fan of a boat motor, but it's a great story. Keep up the good work!

Well, that was quite the set-up...

And I'd have to agree with Kaoru, when it rains, it pours.

You've done an excellent job. Keep up the good work.

I've only read up to Chapter Three so far, and I honestly have to say that this story is beyond what I expected. I'm serious, it really blew me away. The first-person perspective was a great touch, and you've really got the reader hooked. I noticed some spelling and grammatical errors, but for the content of the story and how quickly the tension is escalating, I didn't pay much heed. I'll tell you, you have great potential, and this story is definitely on my favorites. Keep up your work, it's excellent!

holy crap, you have to update sooner! that chapter left me hanging! im dying to read some more! i want to know what the hell happens in the next chapters! omg, i wanna read read read! update sooner! dont get writers block!! please please!! update sooner ill be waiting! ive been checking this story for updates since forever, then i gave up and then when i come back i see its updated! this story is basically crack for me, i love the way you write and express yourself, i really wish that i could write like that, im a beggining writer, but my writing is no match for this! you rock! you really do. if you have an email, please let me know so we can chat sometime! if you have msn,or aol, or yahoo, anything?! well anyway, ill stop with the stalker shit now and just update!!

grr baby, you turn me on honey, you have an email so that you can chat with me sometime? this story is incredible.