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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter once again...I am glad you updated so soon..I can\'t get enough!! Hopefully there will be some twist or turns..maybe a pregnany..hmm that would be interesting...but as it is very spicy hopefully a lemon is coming up =D
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
grr! damn Aoshi!!! ugh! makes me mad! plz update soon! great chapter!!!
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! I was afraid you weren\'t going to update...but alas..you have given greatness once again! Ahh kaoru is finally afraid...YaY! Please update soon...MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENES NEXT!!!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! MY GOODNESS!!
This is a first. Kaoru ACTUALLY afraid?!?!? It\'s the end of the world isn\'t it?
I should have known that those two (Aoshi and Tomoe) would have a hot little session.
It was bound to happen. I mean come on, they\'ve been friends for a long time and Aoshi was there when Tomoe needed him the most. I bet poor Misao isn\'t all too happy with this, seein how she fell into Kaoru\'s arms. And It makes me wonder about Kenshin. Is he going to kick Aoshi\'s ass? Not that Aoshi actually deserves it. Kenshin DID cheat on his wife. Just so many unanswerable questions!!!
Update soon. You are by far the greatest authoress of RK fics!!! XD
I cannot and I MEAN cannot wait for the next chapter. I\'m on the edge of a cliff in suspence!! Please don\'t make us wait long.
Until next update....
This is a first. Kaoru ACTUALLY afraid?!?!? It\'s the end of the world isn\'t it?
I should have known that those two (Aoshi and Tomoe) would have a hot little session.
It was bound to happen. I mean come on, they\'ve been friends for a long time and Aoshi was there when Tomoe needed him the most. I bet poor Misao isn\'t all too happy with this, seein how she fell into Kaoru\'s arms. And It makes me wonder about Kenshin. Is he going to kick Aoshi\'s ass? Not that Aoshi actually deserves it. Kenshin DID cheat on his wife. Just so many unanswerable questions!!!
Update soon. You are by far the greatest authoress of RK fics!!! XD
I cannot and I MEAN cannot wait for the next chapter. I\'m on the edge of a cliff in suspence!! Please don\'t make us wait long.
Until next update....
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::whistles:: very good. Very dramatic at the end, but I think it was done tastefully. To respond to the reviewer comment, I could be of assistance if you would like. I\'ve been quietly watching where the story was going for a while, and I like it, I would like to help with proofreading for grammar and such (I\'m a fellow writer myself, so I know what you mean when you re-read things and still miss them entirely). Email me if you are interested, I work full-time, but I have the nights to myself and would love to help out. Thanks a bunch for the story ;).
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! What a cliffy! I loved the chapter. You have me on my knees begging for more!
Keep it up. It\'s such an awsome story.
Poor Misao... :/
Keep it up. It\'s such an awsome story.
Poor Misao... :/
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg.... please please, it can\'t be so! WAHHHHH!!! adultering aoshi?! how can it be? sniffles, please please continue SOON!
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well this was short and now i really really want to know what kenshin does to aoshi....i\'m so disapointed in him....and i feel bad for poor misao...well can\'t wait for your next update..and who said your grammer was off i thought it was ok.
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww...MAN....so they did do the deed...Tomoe did cheat w/ Aoshi? Hmm well I didnt really see that comming, I mean I kind of thought it was all in Kaoru\'s head but I suppose thats the way things headed when they were alone and she was emotional. Well All I can do now is wait ever so paticently for the next installment... You do really well with grammar and spelling I have zero complaints in that area, infact I have no complaints at all soo yea...
~*toodles*~
~*toodles*~
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And again Kaoru turns into a wimp! Sigh! Don\'t get me wrong, I like your story. I\'ve been following it at fanfiction from the start. I just feel kinda disappointed that Kaoru\'s character is weakening. :(