rate_review Reviews

This was wonderful. Even if I knew little or maybe even nothing about this fandom, this would be a good read. The cadence of Krad's speech matched the roughness he desired. The sex was well balanced with the thoughts. It builds momentum in the reader as Krad's momentum build's. I almost want to say it was expected that Krad would breakdown and ask for more and thus anti climatic but pacing, word choices, mood and tone that was created makes the reader feel present and thus the breaking down was important. The kiss was a surprise and of course the last line perfect. Well done. Thanks for writing and posting.

O.O WoW That was good. The words flowed. The plot was awsoe. Even though to others that's not a plot. Damn That was good. It was well written to continue writing I would like to read more of your work

Bo YEAH !!! Thats what ppl need to be writning ! Do you not agree...?! Why cant ppl see it our way ?That was quite nice I hope to read more !

that was enjoyable. i watch the series on anime on demand and i thought it seemed like something dark and krad might do if ever given the chance. as i watch the show i sometimes wonder about those two.

Very good, you definately pinned Krad\'s persona, I think you could take this further than a one shot,

woo hoo it was good you keep at it i was reading it to my friend on the phone and she liked it too keep up the good work.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Kawaii!!

That was pretty damn amazing! I actually felt kind of sorry for Krad there and I think he is a cold bastard otherwise. A damn sexy cold bastard. Hehe.

Amazing...

I\'m shocked that you have so few reviews--you\'re just plain great.

wow...sugoi ^_^ that was beautifuly written, loved it, ano.. i dont understand how being ravished by dark could make krad broken..