rate_review Reviews

very good

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

GREAT! Normally I don\'t like het, but your story is an exception. I wish there were more good stories about Knives out there...

awwwwww! this was such a great story! It was serious at times too, but still cute, I loved it!

Wow! that was a damn good story!!!!!!!!!! I mean on a scale of 1 to 10 that was 10 easy. I hope any all of your story are just as good. Keep up the good work for furture stories.

Nicely done. You did a really nice job of staying true to the characters, and managed to make knives\' conversion intoa believable one--something I wasn\'t sure, upon watching the series, could be done. Just two things: the use of \"had\" (as in \"had run\") can make the voice of a writer sound passive; it\'s not really necissaf yof you\'ve already established you\'re talking about pastpast, ie \"three days ago.\"
Also, the bit about tracking the slavers seemed a bit awkward at parts, almost forced, and the explanation of the confused trail seemed a bit awkward as well. ^_^;; I hope you don\'t take offense, I really liked this piece. Congrats on finishing something so extensive.

okay, I haven\'t read it all yet, but...I love it so far. It\'s really good. At some point I want top top to the last chapter just to see how it ends, but I don\'t want to ruin it. Anyway, just sayin it\'s really good

Fabulous last line. I\'m gonna just sit here and stare dreamily out in space
for a few. Oh, and thanks for the story.

Bye!
CybrEmly

Hi, UpDaTe SoOn!! I love this story!!! Man..Knives x Meryl Rules!

Well..Bye!

Oh, c\'mon, where\'d he put it? Tell me! *pouting* C\'mon, please?