rate_review Reviews

I probably shouldn\'t be saying this. xD It\'s one of those weird pairings that only yaoi fangirls can think up but... =D What am I saying? I\'m one of those infamous yaoi fangirls. It\'s very well written. I was so eager to figure it out. I liked it alot.

And for all the true yaoi fangirls out there! *tosses confetti over this fic and does a little dance* Yay!

Wow...I can\'t see Hideki/Minoru myself, but this was extremely well-written and beautiful. ^^

cant he get arrested for that sort of g? sg? sexual harrasement,child pedaphile,and YES that can be considered rape...oh well, it doesnt really matter

gomen ne, that was rude of me....it was beautiful though, great writing

Well... This one\'s a little tricky to give an opinion of. Good lemon, to be sure, and I liked how you didn\'t know who it was until the very end. The style is farely good, the grammar is perfectly fine... The thing is, this is all very well and good, except that there is absolutely no plot. Maybe it\'s disgustingly boring of me to want a plot *and* a le but but if Minoru and Hideki were to have an actual relationship beforehand, it would make the lemon much more interesting. Is this their first time together? Kinda hard to tell. If so, what about Chi and Yuzuki? They\'re never mentioned. I\'m not trying to flame you; just give you constructive criticism. I understand that this is your first fic, but you might want to put a little more effort into it next time. Keep writing; you\'ll get the hang of it.

Total perfection. Made me so Wet! Oh my god! Five stars!!

I hope everyone likes this... I need to fix it, I know. I\'m working on it.

A Great story, very romantic, playful, and cute.
very smooth running and very descriptive.

like i said before, all over; great! especially the characters. mmmh.

gomen ne, i forgot to review ^_^\" it was soooooo kawaiiii! vewy beautifully written!*sniff sniff* i\'m such a sucker for romance ^_^. keep up the gooood work ma-kun!

OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD!...very cute...little young on minorus side though eh?...oh well...my choice to read it because you gave a disclaimer that they were however old as you wanted them...very nice fic...