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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, please keep it up. There really aren't enough fics about Nuriko and Hori at all, and you've done a fine job with it. And um... I must say, loving these smut scenes ^///^
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January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
maybe it's the pairing, but i think this is my favorite yaoi fic that i have ever read. <3<3<3
*insert token "write more fy smut plz"*
*insert token "write more fy smut plz"*
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Suzaku, that was HOT! Write more!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fic. Im a HxN fan. Can you do a lemon fic of SuboshixAmiboshi. Plz and thank you
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heeey sweetie. First I'd like to say I'm really glad you did something about the shortage of Hotohori/Nuriko fanfics. You know what I would really like to see, one of them falling in love ^^ It would be really nice hehe *hint*
I really liked your portrayal of them and it was one fucking hot chapter. I just wanted to give you a piece of advice, first, maybe you should look for a beta. Your writting is good, but there are typing/grammar/punctuation mistakes we writters will never catch on our story even if we read it thousands of times. I do it all the time.
Second, maybe you should not use their names so much, because it becomes too repetitive. I know from experience how hard it is to find adjectives and things to use when both are male because its just "he did this and he liked it". But there are several things you can use "Younger man, older man, resort to hair color, eye color, skin color, body frame. The larger man, the slender man...you know.
Well, please continue!
Hugs.
I really liked your portrayal of them and it was one fucking hot chapter. I just wanted to give you a piece of advice, first, maybe you should look for a beta. Your writting is good, but there are typing/grammar/punctuation mistakes we writters will never catch on our story even if we read it thousands of times. I do it all the time.
Second, maybe you should not use their names so much, because it becomes too repetitive. I know from experience how hard it is to find adjectives and things to use when both are male because its just "he did this and he liked it". But there are several things you can use "Younger man, older man, resort to hair color, eye color, skin color, body frame. The larger man, the slender man...you know.
Well, please continue!
Hugs.
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, that was good, both chapters. I did like Hotohori and Nuriko as a pair. I also liked that you mentioned Chichiri and Tasuki. I do hope you bring them in as a couple, even though Hotohori and Nuriko are the mains in this one. Good storytelling.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE!!!! please!!!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can\'t wait to see what \'Hori has in store. More Please!!!!
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool*
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was excellent! Thank you for writing this! Suzaku knows there aren\'t enough HotohorixNuriko fics in existence and this was so kawaii. I just *loved* Nuriko dressing Hotohori as a woman and then Miaka not even recognizing him mwahaha that was delightful. And of course the sex was nice too.