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You\'re right they do look good in Hack//Integration? ep.28 usion right? so are they going to get close how good they look in that
win they meet in the real world? I love how they look! soo cool! and win they meet up! also but it in Chinese...Dra\'t I don\'t read
Chines so I hade to put the sub on...but I hope you have them meet soon! in the next one you\'re going to do right?
but tbc. so we can see the next one But I like you\'re Stories they are alright.



~Fake Wings Bitter Sweet~ Keep you\'re eyes on me now that we\'re on the edge of hell.

So is this turning into and Obassion with eveone? it seems so but they do make and cute couple.
well wait fore you to post the next one up win you can.

So there world of Fantasy turnd into and Realty? nice!
Poor Mia I fell bad becuse she turns into and Data bug and you have to Data Drain her...but she up to something na?
Hey ware did you get Hack//Intergration at? (Sorry if I spelled it wrong) I thought it come out with Hack//Sign vol6.
I seen the picuters they do look relly good! so if they meet in the real world they might look as good as they did
In .Hack//Interagation? I hope thry do I\'ve alrady seen .Hack//Dusk and the real palyers Shugo and Rena lucky in the
real world they don\'t look like Kite and Blackrose so I thought since Blackrose and Kite made the players they might
look some what like them...
Yeah I\'m aslo at the part ware Kite and Elk go into the Dungon to find Mia at the 15 floors na? it hard! since I\'m at lv.98
too many data bugs at lv.5 I got to the red zone... enough about that back to the story good job on this one

Keep up the good work tbc.

Oh I like this fic! it sweet but Are they going to meet Peitty soon? so is Mia up to something? she acting odd...
oh yeah she did act odd in the game Are they going to look the same as they did in *The World*? lets hope so
Win are you going to do and song one? that might help you if you do the next one and please do.

Thank you all for the wonderful reviews! I wanna let you guys know that I am working on chapter 5, and so far so good ^_~ I do have .hack//QUARANTINE, but I\'m still at the beginning...at level 92 tho lol, and I still have Elk for now...till I do a mission...grrr...don\'t wanna lose Elk so I won\'t progress in the game >_< I DO know about Mia, and I did sorta intend for her to be kinda evilish cause she\'s a phase, but I know Mia/Maha really isn\'t bad. I will make the story go along with the game for that aspect of plot because I find it intriguing ^_^. I also got .hack//INTEGRATION today and I watched it like 3 times aly ^_y ^___^ The episode is actually episode 27 of .hack//SIGN, Unison. VERY awesome...if you like Kite, Elk, Mia, etc...and wanna see the characters dance, this is great for you lol ^_~ Well, I\'m babbling now ^^;; so I\'ll stop and keep writing. Ja neeeee!

Otaku-Chan ^_~

P.S. I have no clue how long this fic will be or what the climax (no pun intended) will be, but as long as people like Kite/Elk as much as I do, I guess it\'ll be pretty long ^_~ (again, no pun lol)

thank you thank you thank you so much i love the elk kite pairing but i couldnt find any lemony goodness i love love love your story please please please keep writting it please!!!!!

Hi
Read you\'re story it was cute and sort of romances so I got and qustion fore the next one...
Who is the most Dominance out of the two? since kind of go back and read over and see who is lol.
Cute! oh yeah like you\'re fan art I wish I can draw like that but I can\'t! so they are going to meet in Japan
Or Osaka right? Ohh I can\'t wait until they meet out side of the World it would be fun to see!
I wonder if Kite has the Bracalet in the real world...

forget? no I mean don\'t lose this one and up-date if you can...
did you get Hack//Qauratine yet? if you got to the end you know what is going to happen...
this story is it goio beo be the same like Maha/Mia? but she sound evil in this story to tell you
the truth or I can be seeing it wrong is she going to do something bad?
I\'m not rushing you tbc.

It needs more, must have moorrreeee/ I have waited for Kite+Elk story ever since I got the game. I\'m so happy you made one. *glomps* Thank you, thank you! Please update!!! Pleaseeeeee!

Thanks for all the reviews. Unfortuantely, since 2nd semester started, I\'ve been piled down with homework, added to that I babysit every week day. So the result, no time. But I will try my damndest to get ch 5 out soon! I promise!

Otaku-Chan ^_~

PS what do you ppl mean when you ask me if \"I forgot this\"? what did I forget?