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for Fractured Reality

by Kurai18

person Zelphie
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*becomes dizzy and falls out of chair* O/O HOW did you get so fucking good at those?!?!?! ^/^ That was GREAT! No lemon has been able to...\"awaken\" (Don\'t ask) certain feelings within me like this chapter now. Oorriorries, I, um... Yeah, that was good! ...Elk is STILL only in \"love\" with Kite now...right? PLEASE?
-Zelphie
person Shu-chan
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
>.>;; So damn sexy...! You made my \'day\' better! Thank you! :P Wow.. who\'da though?! Balmung and Elk!? Damn.. Balmung is one hot guy, ne?! *drools* I just finished .hack//Infection Xmas Eve! Soo now I gotta get Part 2. Well... hope you have a rockin\' vacation! Mine sucks so far... keep of the great ( and sexy ) work!
person Shuichi16x
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AW, I love Kite&Elk!! But I don\'t like Balmung&Elk!! Come on, please keep it Kite&Elk only!
person Kurai18
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much Rikku! Now I can put up all of the fic and keep working on new chapters! Thanks for all the support from everyone and thanks for the reviews too ^_^

A very happy,
Otaku-Chan ^_~
person Tsukasa-Magic
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work, Otaku-chan ^ - ^! Luv ya!
person Kurisuteru-chan
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow Those two are quiet horny... Can you do that in a video game? heh well I guess now you can. >.>;; lol Anyway it\'s good. You have a talent for writing lemon ne?
person Star Twilight
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God-DAMN. Kite must be excited as hell!! *drool, pant pant* I wasn\'t even there, and look at me!! This is like WHOA... O_O *tries to rub blush out of cheeks* Poor Kite...
person Sato Takai
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*speechless*
person Zelphie
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You. Are. Good. With. Lemons. O.O Lovely, great, passionate, sexy, perfect! (Well, not perfect, as it coule bee been longer...:P) GREAT job! ^ ^
-Zelphie
person Dark Mitochondrion
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU\'RE SO PERVERTED!...nice, I like this story. I\'ll be seeing ya around, hopefully.

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